Talk:Annie Graham/@comment-25040840-20200912093805

As written: "Annie Graham is the daughter of Ellen Leigh who works for an art gallery designing miniatures." is terribly ambiguous.

I'd suggest: "Annie Graham, the daughter of Ellen Leigh, works for an art gallery designing miniatures.," or possibly: "Annie Graham is the daughter of Ellen Leigh, she works for an art gallery designing miniatures."

Or even: Annie Graham is daughter of Ellen Leigh. Annie works for an art gallery designing miniatures.